[Clfs-dev] Report bugs
Michio Matsuyama
michio_matsuyama at yahoo.co.jp
Fri May 19 02:22:09 PDT 2017
Hi,
I report the miscoding or typo bugs, maybe, on the XML sources of
CLFS book as follows:
Bug #1:
Sortas values should not be like "a-...", but like "b-...".
final-system/sparc/elftoaout.xml
final-system/sparc/silo.xml
Bug #2:
Misplace the title: "The meaning of the new configure option:".
final-system/common/shadow.xml
final-system/multilib/shadow.xml
Bug #3: (only for 'sysvinit')
Group for D-bus, not User.
Bug #4: (only for 'systemd')
Wrong xref linkend for man-pages in the Attr package section.
#1: final-system/sparc/elftoaout.xml (Branch 'systemd', other branches)
==============================================================================
diff -Naur orig/final-system/sparc/elftoaout.xml new/final-system/sparc/elftoaout.xml
--- orig/final-system/sparc/elftoaout.xml 2017-03-12 22:10:29.885087000 +0900
+++ new/final-system/sparc/elftoaout.xml 2017-05-18 13:43:22.681986281 +0900
@@ -61,7 +61,7 @@
<para>Converts an ELF-formatted file to Sparc a.out format for use
with openprom</para>
<indexterm zone="ch-system-elftoaout elftoaout">
- <primary sortas="a-elftoaout">elftoaout</primary>
+ <primary sortas="b-elftoaout">elftoaout</primary>
</indexterm>
</listitem>
</varlistentry>
#1: final-system/sparc/silo.xml (Branch 'systemd', other branches)
==============================================================================
diff -Naur orig/final-system/sparc/silo.xml new/final-system/sparc/silo.xml
--- orig/final-system/sparc/silo.xml 2017-03-12 22:10:29.885087000 +0900
+++ new/final-system/sparc/silo.xml 2017-05-18 13:43:36.251600416 +0900
@@ -60,7 +60,7 @@
<para>Silo bootloader installer. This program installs the
first stage into the bootblock.</para>
<indexterm zone="ch-system-silo silo">
- <primary sortas="a-silo">silo</primary>
+ <primary sortas="b-silo">silo</primary>
</indexterm>
</listitem>
</varlistentry>
@@ -71,7 +71,7 @@
<para>Checks to see whether a file is readable
by silo (very handy if you have larger disks).</para>
<indexterm zone="ch-system-silo silocheck">
- <primary sortas="a-silocheck">silocheck</primary>
+ <primary sortas="b-silocheck">silocheck</primary>
</indexterm>
</listitem>
</varlistentry>
@@ -82,7 +82,7 @@
<para>Is a file that is called by the tilo command to build
a TFTP boot image.</para>
<indexterm zone="ch-system-silo maketilo">
- <primary sortas="a-maketilo">maketilo</primary>
+ <primary sortas="b-maketilo">maketilo</primary>
</indexterm>
</listitem>
</varlistentry>
@@ -94,7 +94,7 @@
embodies several kernel images for different Sun architectures and
a ramdisk root image.</para>
<indexterm zone="ch-system-silo tilo">
- <primary sortas="a-tilo">tilo</primary>
+ <primary sortas="b-tilo">tilo</primary>
</indexterm>
</listitem>
</varlistentry>
#2: final-system/common/shadow.xml (Branch 'systemd', other branches)
==============================================================================
diff -Naur orig/final-system/common/shadow.xml new/final-system/common/shadow.xml
--- orig/final-system/common/shadow.xml 2017-05-18 13:42:03.653069600 +0900
+++ new/final-system/common/shadow.xml 2017-05-18 13:53:11.289464787 +0900
@@ -53,9 +53,9 @@
<screen os="e"><userinput>./configure \
--sysconfdir=/etc</userinput></screen>
-<para os="f">The meaning of the new configure option:</para>
-
<variablelist os="g">
+ <title>The meaning of the new configure option:</title>
+
<varlistentry>
<term><parameter>--sysconfdir=/etc</parameter></term>
<listitem><para>Tells Shadow to install its configuration files into
#2: final-system/multilib/shadow.xml (Branch 'systemd', other branches)
==============================================================================
diff -Naur orig/final-system/multilib/shadow.xml new/final-system/multilib/shadow.xml
--- orig/final-system/multilib/shadow.xml 2017-05-18 13:42:03.837069600 +0900
+++ new/final-system/multilib/shadow.xml 2017-05-18 13:55:27.443958980 +0900
@@ -42,10 +42,6 @@
<xi:include xmlns:xi="http://www.w3.org/2001/XInclude"
href="../common/shadow.xml"
- xpointer="xpointer(//*[@os='f'])"/>
-
- <xi:include xmlns:xi="http://www.w3.org/2001/XInclude"
- href="../common/shadow.xml"
xpointer="xpointer(//*[@os='g'])"/>
<xi:include xmlns:xi="http://www.w3.org/2001/XInclude"
#3: boot/common/pwdgroup.xml (Branch 'sysvinit')
==============================================================================
diff -Naur orig/boot/common/pwdgroup.xml new/boot/common/pwdgroup.xml
--- orig/boot/common/pwdgroup.xml 2017-05-19 17:55:02.884672900 +0900
+++ new/boot/common/pwdgroup.xml 2017-05-19 17:55:50.461582103 +0900
@@ -147,7 +147,7 @@
<varlistentry>
<term><literal>messagebus:x:&gid-messagebus;:</literal></term>
<listitem>
- <para>User for D-Bus</para>
+ <para>Group for D-Bus</para>
</listitem>
</varlistentry>
<varlistentry>
#4: final-system/common/attr.xml (Branch 'systemd')
==============================================================================
diff -Naur orig/final-system/common/attr.xml new/final-system/common/attr.xml
--- orig/final-system/common/attr.xml 2017-05-19 18:15:37.763743800 +0900
+++ new/final-system/common/attr.xml 2017-05-19 18:17:15.843362151 +0900
@@ -26,7 +26,7 @@
<title>Installation of Attr</title>
<para os="s1">Apply a sed which prevents man-pages which were installed by
- the <xref linkend="man-pages"/> package:</para>
+ the <xref linkend="ch-system-man-pages"/> package:</para>
<screen os="s2"><userinput>sed -i -e "/SUBDIRS/s|man[25]||g" man/Makefile</userinput></screen>
Regards,
matsu
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Michio Matsuyama
michio_matsuyama AT yahoo DOT co DOT jp
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