[Clfs-commits] commit: r4111 - in /trunk/BOOK/final-system: common/ncurses.xml sparc64-64/glibc.xml sparc64/glibc-64bit.xml sparc64/inetutils.xml

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Author: chris at beaker67.com
Date: Thu Dec 18 17:52:33 2008
New Revision: 4111

Log:
More text fixes

Modified:
    trunk/BOOK/final-system/common/ncurses.xml
    trunk/BOOK/final-system/sparc64-64/glibc.xml
    trunk/BOOK/final-system/sparc64/glibc-64bit.xml
    trunk/BOOK/final-system/sparc64/inetutils.xml

Modified: trunk/BOOK/final-system/common/ncurses.xml
==============================================================================
--- trunk/BOOK/final-system/common/ncurses.xml (original)
+++ trunk/BOOK/final-system/common/ncurses.xml Thu Dec 18 17:52:33 2008
@@ -25,8 +25,8 @@
   <sect2 role="installation">
     <title>Installation of Ncurses</title>
 
-    <para os="p1">The following patches merges all updates from the &ncurses-version; Branch
-    from the Ncurses developers:</para>
+    <para os="p1">The following patch contains updates from the &ncurses-version; branch
+    by the Ncurses developers:</para>
 
 <screen os="p2"><userinput>patch -Np1 -i ../&ncurses-branch_update-patch;</userinput></screen>
 

Modified: trunk/BOOK/final-system/sparc64-64/glibc.xml
==============================================================================
--- trunk/BOOK/final-system/sparc64-64/glibc.xml (original)
+++ trunk/BOOK/final-system/sparc64-64/glibc.xml Thu Dec 18 17:52:33 2008
@@ -118,8 +118,8 @@
     href="../common/glibc.xml"
     xpointer="xpointer(//*[@os='t'])"/>
 
-    <para os="u">The stubs.h header installed by glibc looks for stubs-32.h
-    and stubs-64.h. This configuration of glibc only generates stubs-64.h. Fix
+    <para os="u">The stubs.h header installed by Glibc looks for stubs-32.h
+    and stubs-64.h. This configuration of Glibc only generates stubs-64.h. Fix
     this with the following:</para>
 
     <screen os="v"><userinput>mv -v /usr/include/gnu/stubs{-64,}.h</userinput></screen>

Modified: trunk/BOOK/final-system/sparc64/glibc-64bit.xml
==============================================================================
--- trunk/BOOK/final-system/sparc64/glibc-64bit.xml (original)
+++ trunk/BOOK/final-system/sparc64/glibc-64bit.xml Thu Dec 18 17:52:33 2008
@@ -49,7 +49,7 @@
     href="../multilib/glibc-64bit.xml"
     xpointer="xpointer(//*[@os='m2'])"/>
 
-    <para os="t1">For TLS support on the Sparc64 we will need to add the following lines to
+    <para os="t1">For TLS support on the Sparc64 we will need to add the following line to
     <filename>config.cache</filename>:</para>
 
 <screen os="t2"><userinput>echo "libc_cv_sparc64_tls=yes" >> config.cache</userinput></screen>

Modified: trunk/BOOK/final-system/sparc64/inetutils.xml
==============================================================================
--- trunk/BOOK/final-system/sparc64/inetutils.xml (original)
+++ trunk/BOOK/final-system/sparc64/inetutils.xml Thu Dec 18 17:52:33 2008
@@ -29,8 +29,8 @@
     href="../common/inetutils.xml"
     xpointer="xpointer(//*[@os='p2'])"/>
 
-    <para os="ap1">The follow patches fixes Bus Errors when you attempt to use
-    ping on sparc:</para>
+    <para os="ap1">The following patch fixes Bus Errors when attempting to use
+    <command>ping<command> on sparc:</para>
 
 <screen os="ap2"><userinput>patch -Np1 -i ../&inetutils-memcpy_sparc64-patch;</userinput></screen>