[Clfs-commits] commit: r4110 - in /trunk/BOOK: boot/sparc/silo.xml bootable/mips/arcload.xml final-system/common/linux-headers.xml

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Author: chris at beaker67.com
Date: Thu Dec 18 07:40:24 2008
New Revision: 4110

Log:
Minor text fixes

Modified:
    trunk/BOOK/boot/sparc/silo.xml
    trunk/BOOK/bootable/mips/arcload.xml
    trunk/BOOK/final-system/common/linux-headers.xml

Modified: trunk/BOOK/boot/sparc/silo.xml
==============================================================================
--- trunk/BOOK/boot/sparc/silo.xml (original)
+++ trunk/BOOK/boot/sparc/silo.xml Thu Dec 18 07:40:24 2008
@@ -33,8 +33,8 @@
    not need to reinstall it. Silo is just a chain loader and has no bearing on
    the system build.</para>
 
-   <para os="c">After you get the build copied to when you can boot, you will need
-   to issue the following command:</para>
+   <para os="c">After you get the build copied to the system that it will
+   boot from, you will need to issue the following command:</para>
 
 <screen os="d"><userinput>silo -f</userinput></screen>
 

Modified: trunk/BOOK/bootable/mips/arcload.xml
==============================================================================
--- trunk/BOOK/bootable/mips/arcload.xml (original)
+++ trunk/BOOK/bootable/mips/arcload.xml Thu Dec 18 07:40:24 2008
@@ -20,7 +20,7 @@
     Servers.</para>
   </note>
 
-  <para os="b">Earlier, we compiled and installed the Arcload  boot loader
+  <para os="b">Earlier, we compiled and installed the Arcload boot loader
   software in preparation for this step. Now we will configure our system
   to boot using Arcload. Here is a simple <filename>arc.cf</filename>
   to use.</para>

Modified: trunk/BOOK/final-system/common/linux-headers.xml
==============================================================================
--- trunk/BOOK/final-system/common/linux-headers.xml (original)
+++ trunk/BOOK/final-system/common/linux-headers.xml Thu Dec 18 07:40:24 2008
@@ -25,7 +25,7 @@
   <sect2 role="installation">
     <title>Installation of Linux-Headers</title>
 
-    <para os="a">For this step you will need the kernel tarballs.</para>
+    <para os="a">For this step you will need the kernel tarball.</para>
 
     <para os="b">Install the header files that are common to all architectures:</para>