[Clfs-support] clfs-mbdd: brdf: dropbear: 2 typos: 'For those for more' / 'adventureous' .

[akhiezer]

Hi,


Ref:
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https://github.com/bradfa/clfs-embedded/blob/master/BOOK/beyond/common/dropbear.xml
https://github.com/bradfa/clfs-embedded/blob/2017.04-fixes/BOOK/beyond/common/dropbear.xml
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Dropbear page has the text:
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  For those for more adventureous,
===


This has two errors:
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  * the ungrammatical '... for ...' ;
  * the misspelling of 'adventureous' - should be s/reo/ro/  .
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Adjusted ver probably should be:
====
either:

  For those more adventurous,
==
or:

  For those who are more adventurous,
====


Cf. earlier similar change for busybox page:
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40d238ab7c8a6e62427e661ea8ffd0bffbb1019f
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--------------------- BOOK/final-system/common/busybox.xml ---------------------
index 6676471..60c1361 100644
@@ -35,7 +35,7 @@
 <screen os="b"><userinput>make distclean</userinput></screen>
 
     <note os="e"> <para>We tell BusyBox to use the generic defconfig.  For those
-        for more adventurous, you can use <command>make menuconfig</command>,
+        who are more adventurous, you can use <command>make menuconfig</command>,
         and create a custom or modified configuration for your build.</para>
     </note>
===
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rgds,
akh





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