[Clfs-dev] CLFS 1.1.0-rc2 , Chapter 6 -- some english errors...

[db m]

Greets,

Still working my way through - Version 1.1.0-rc2-x86_64-Multilib

Nothing really wrong here, just the following points of english ;

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6.8. Coreutils-6.9

6.8.1. Installation of Coreutils


'by giving the man page a newer timestamp then its corresponding source file'

english tense error  --> replace  'then'  with   'than'

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6.21. Texinfo-4.11

6.21.1. Installation of Texinfo

'Fixes a build error due to mbstate is not defined. Apply the following patch to fix this'

lousy english --> should perhaps be  'Fixes a build error due to mbstate being (currently) undefined'

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Onwards ever onwards......


Regards,

Don


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