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commit eb7a60c843d703a92d7e8a919992f94b85ec4d7d
Author: Chris Staub <chris at beaker67.com>
Date:   Thu Jul 3 04:33:29 2014 -0400

    Text updates for sparc partitioning page

diff --git a/BOOK/partitioning/sparc/creatingpartition.xml b/BOOK/partitioning/sparc/creatingpartition.xml
index c40378d..34580fa 100644
--- a/BOOK/partitioning/sparc/creatingpartition.xml
+++ b/BOOK/partitioning/sparc/creatingpartition.xml
@@ -32,12 +32,12 @@
 
   <para>On a Sparc system we have to create a special partition first. This
   partition is called <quote>Whole disk</quote>, and must be the 3rd partition
-  on the disk.</para>
+  on the disk. The other partitions are virtual slices of this
+  <quote>Whole disk</quote> partition. </para>
 
-  <para>The other partitions are virtual slices of this <quote>Whole disk</quote>
-  partition. But there are some limitations on the first partion of
+  <para>There are some limitations on the first partition of
   <filename class="devicefile">hda</filename> or <filename
   class="devicefile">sda</filename> on the system. This partition must be less
-  than 2 gigabytes and this partition must be root.</para>
+  than 2 gigabytes, and it must be root.</para>
 
 </sect1>

commit 4d8d705b48350980eab2a105ff83befdf12e2f9d
Author: Chris Staub <chris at beaker67.com>
Date:   Thu Jul 3 04:33:19 2014 -0400

    Text updates for mips partitioning

diff --git a/BOOK/partitioning/mips/creatingpartition.xml b/BOOK/partitioning/mips/creatingpartition.xml
index 8e1aab1..a38407b 100644
--- a/BOOK/partitioning/mips/creatingpartition.xml
+++ b/BOOK/partitioning/mips/creatingpartition.xml
@@ -30,10 +30,10 @@
   href="../common/creatingpartition.xml"
   xpointer="xpointer(//*[@os='e'])"/>
 
-  <para>On a Cobalt RaQ2/Cube2 we use the existing firmware for a boot loader,
-  it requires an <systemitem class="filesystem">ext2</systemitem> revision 0
-  partition to boot from. So here is the recommended partition for a Cobalt
-  RaQ2/Cube2 system:</para>
+  <para>On a Cobalt RaQ2/Cube2 we use the existing firmware for a boot
+  loader—it requires an <systemitem class="filesystem">ext2</systemitem>
+  revision 0 partition to boot from. Here is the recommended partition layout
+  for a Cobalt RaQ2/Cube2 system:</para>
 
   <itemizedlist>
     <listitem>
@@ -45,7 +45,7 @@
     </listitem>
     <listitem>
       <para>The third partition is going to be your swap partition, which will
-      be the same amount as the RAM installed in the system.</para>
+      be the same size as the amount as the RAM installed in the system.</para>
     </listitem>
   </itemizedlist>
 

commit 170807921e6ab5acc26cc61b2bbe953cb8343e1d
Author: Chris Staub <chris at beaker67.com>
Date:   Thu Jul 3 04:32:44 2014 -0400

    Updated date

diff --git a/BOOK/general.ent b/BOOK/general.ent
index 6899255..13fd4dc 100644
--- a/BOOK/general.ent
+++ b/BOOK/general.ent
@@ -2,7 +2,7 @@
 
 <!ENTITY month "07"> <!-- Use two digits -->
 <!ENTITY month_name "July">
-<!ENTITY day "02"> <!-- Use two digits -->
+<!ENTITY day "03"> <!-- Use two digits -->
 <!ENTITY year "2014"> <!-- Use four digits -->
 
 <!ENTITY releasedate "&month_name; &day;, &year;">

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Summary of changes:
 BOOK/general.ent                              |    2 +-
 BOOK/partitioning/mips/creatingpartition.xml  |   10 +++++-----
 BOOK/partitioning/sparc/creatingpartition.xml |    8 ++++----
 3 files changed, 10 insertions(+), 10 deletions(-)


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