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commit 79440315ff9ac40664723e1efdfea5088aa7a045
Author: Andrew Bradford <andrew at bradfordembedded.com>
Date: Sat Sep 22 14:57:54 2012 -0400
Update date
Signed-off-by: Andrew Bradford <andrew at bradfordembedded.com>
diff --git a/BOOK/general.ent b/BOOK/general.ent
index b4f1e34..d8b0ef2 100644
--- a/BOOK/general.ent
+++ b/BOOK/general.ent
@@ -2,7 +2,7 @@
<!ENTITY month "09"> <!-- Use two digits -->
<!ENTITY month_name "September">
-<!ENTITY day "18"> <!-- Use two digits -->
+<!ENTITY day "22"> <!-- Use two digits -->
<!ENTITY year "2012"> <!-- Use four digits -->
<!ENTITY releasedate "&month_name; &day;, &year;">
commit f77f836c6c7463d6886a8dd29190221f57774262
Author: Andrew Bradford <andrew at bradfordembedded.com>
Date: Sat Sep 22 14:56:34 2012 -0400
Update changelog
Signed-off-by: Andrew Bradford <andrew at bradfordembedded.com>
diff --git a/BOOK/introduction/common/changelog.xml b/BOOK/introduction/common/changelog.xml
index 4676be5..5f9848d 100644
--- a/BOOK/introduction/common/changelog.xml
+++ b/BOOK/introduction/common/changelog.xml
@@ -36,6 +36,15 @@
</listitem>
-->
<listitem>
+ <para>September 22, 2012</para>
+ <itemizedlist>
+ <listitem>
+ <para>[abradford] - Small fixes to prologue and ch 1 and 2.</para>
+ </listitem>
+ </itemizedlist>
+ </listitem>
+
+ <listitem>
<para>September 13, 2012</para>
<itemizedlist>
<listitem>
commit 33125aa07f1253910d8fae84d9c31f4de6ea56d0
Author: Andrew Bradford <andrew at bradfordembedded.com>
Date: Sat Sep 22 14:44:54 2012 -0400
part/intro: Grammar fixup
Signed-off-by: Andrew Bradford <andrew at bradfordembedded.com>
diff --git a/BOOK/partitioning/common/introduction.xml b/BOOK/partitioning/common/introduction.xml
index 5e49b41..b151b37 100644
--- a/BOOK/partitioning/common/introduction.xml
+++ b/BOOK/partitioning/common/introduction.xml
@@ -14,7 +14,7 @@
prepared. We will create the partition itself, create a file system
on it, and mount it.</para>
- <para>In some circumstances based on the platform your building for this
- step can be skipped.</para>
+ <para>In some circumstances, based on the platform you're building for,
+ this step can be skipped.</para>
</sect1>
commit fd7b7de013a85e768349571cccfb502cfec46caf
Author: Andrew Bradford <andrew at bradfordembedded.com>
Date: Sat Sep 22 14:40:41 2012 -0400
intro/resources: Update mirror and contact info
Only reference CLFS mirrors and mailing lists.
Signed-off-by: Andrew Bradford <andrew at bradfordembedded.com>
diff --git a/BOOK/introduction/common/resources.xml b/BOOK/introduction/common/resources.xml
index bd77201..fede2f1 100644
--- a/BOOK/introduction/common/resources.xml
+++ b/BOOK/introduction/common/resources.xml
@@ -61,20 +61,18 @@
<sect2 id="ch-intro-mirrors" xreflabel="Chapter 1 - Mirror sites">
<title>Mirror Sites</title>
- <para>The LFS and CLFS projects have a number of world-wide mirrors to make
+ <para>The CLFS project has a number of world-wide mirrors to make
accessing the website and downloading the required packages more
- convenient. Please visit the LFS website at <ulink
- url="&lfs-root;mirrors.html"/> for a list of current mirrors of
- the LFS website, or <ulink url="&clfs-wiki;wiki/mirrors"/> for
- mirrors of the CLFS website.</para>
+ convenient. Please visit <ulink url="&clfs-wiki;wiki/mirrors"/> for
+ CLFS mirror information.</para>
</sect2>
<sect2 id="ch-intro-contactinfo">
<title>Contact Information</title>
- <para>Please direct all your questions and comments to one of the LFS
- or CLFS mailing lists (see above).</para>
+ <para>Please direct all your questions and comments to one of the
+ CLFS mailing lists (see above).</para>
</sect2>
commit 681e07d2ffca36b85406ce6c64783aacc38a5e50
Author: Andrew Bradford <andrew at bradfordembedded.com>
Date: Sat Sep 22 14:38:02 2012 -0400
intro/resources: Remove news server info
No longer an active resource.
Signed-off-by: Andrew Bradford <andrew at bradfordembedded.com>
diff --git a/BOOK/introduction/common/resources.xml b/BOOK/introduction/common/resources.xml
index a4b6f6e..bd77201 100644
--- a/BOOK/introduction/common/resources.xml
+++ b/BOOK/introduction/common/resources.xml
@@ -35,15 +35,6 @@
</sect2>
- <sect2 id="ch-intro-newsserver">
- <title>News Server</title>
-
- <para> The Linux From Scratch News Server is no longer available.
- Please use the other support methods listed on this page
- </para>
-
- </sect2>
-
<sect2 id="ch-intro-irc">
<title>IRC</title>
commit 454737d2524520fb9aca9886add0c35a2e63c444
Author: Andrew Bradford <andrew at bradfordembedded.com>
Date: Sat Sep 22 14:33:09 2012 -0400
prologue/errata: Remove link to wiki errata
Until there's a released version of the Embedded book, having an errata
page on the wiki is pointless, development is still actively ongoing.
Refs #913
Signed-off-by: Andrew Bradford <andrew at bradfordembedded.com>
diff --git a/BOOK/prologue/common/errata.xml b/BOOK/prologue/common/errata.xml
index 5d6d30a..7b95991 100644
--- a/BOOK/prologue/common/errata.xml
+++ b/BOOK/prologue/common/errata.xml
@@ -12,11 +12,14 @@
<para>The software used to create a CLFS system is constantly being
updated and enhanced. Security warnings and bug fixes may become
- available after the CLFS book has been released. To check whether the
+ available after the CLFS book has been released. Once a release of
+ the CLFS Embedded book is made, this page will provide a link to the
+ CLFS Embedded errata page.
+ <!--To check whether the
package versions or instructions in this release of CLFS need any
modifications to accommodate security vulnerabilities or other bug fixes,
please visit <ulink url="&errata;"/> before proceeding with your build.
You should note any changes shown and apply them to the relevant section
- of the book as you progress with building the CLFS system.</para>
+ of the book as you progress with building the CLFS system.--></para>
</sect1>
commit f54e1f96ad7d85143ce3ec733ff8a3f83c01c13a
Author: Andrew Bradford <andrew at bradfordembedded.com>
Date: Sat Sep 22 14:24:41 2012 -0400
prologue/org: Update to fit Embedded
Signed-off-by: Andrew Bradford <andrew at bradfordembedded.com>
diff --git a/BOOK/prologue/common/organization.xml b/BOOK/prologue/common/organization.xml
index c8a4cf3..03f27d8 100644
--- a/BOOK/prologue/common/organization.xml
+++ b/BOOK/prologue/common/organization.xml
@@ -24,7 +24,7 @@
<title>Part II - Preparing for the Build</title>
<para>Part II describes how to prepare for the building
- process—making a partition and downloading the packages.</para>
+ process including downloading the packages.</para>
</sect2>
@@ -32,31 +32,25 @@
<title>Part III - Make the Cross-Compile Tools</title>
<para>Part III shows you how to make a set of Cross-Compiler
- tools. These tools can run on your host system but allow you to
- build packages that will run on your target system.</para>
+ tools. These tools can run on your host system but allow you to
+ build packages that will run on your target system.</para>
</sect2>
<sect2>
- <title>Part IV - Building the Basic Tools</title>
+ <title>Part IV - Building the CLFS System</title>
- <para>Part IV explains how to build a tool chain designed
- to operate on your target system. These are the tools
- that will allow you to build a working system on your
- target computer.</para>
+ <para>Part IV shows you how to build the core CLFS system. Compiling
+ and installing Buxybox and other required packages, making the system
+ bootable, setting up the bootscripts, and installing a bootloader.</para>
</sect2>
<sect2>
- <title>Part V - Building the CLFS System</title>
+ <title>Part V - Beyond CLFS Embedded</title>
- <para>Part V guides the reader through the building of the CLFS
- system—compiling and installing all the packages one by one,
- setting up the boot scripts, and installing the kernel. The resulting
- Linux system is the foundation on which other software can be built to
- expand the system as desired. At the end of this book, there is an
- easy to use reference listing all of the programs, libraries, and
- important files that have been installed.</para>
+ <para>Part V provides instructions on optional packages that can be
+ installed to enhance your CLFS system.</para>
</sect2>
@@ -68,8 +62,7 @@
terms used in the book; Appendix B gives acknowledgments to people
who have helped work on the CLFS project and website; Appendix C and
D have information about package dependencies and the the build
- order. Some architectures may have additional appendices for
- arch-specific issues.</para>
+ order; Appendix E provides the Open Publication License.</para>
</sect2>
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Summary of changes:
BOOK/general.ent | 2 +-
BOOK/introduction/common/changelog.xml | 9 +++++++++
BOOK/introduction/common/resources.xml | 21 +++++----------------
BOOK/partitioning/common/introduction.xml | 4 ++--
BOOK/prologue/common/errata.xml | 7 +++++--
BOOK/prologue/common/organization.xml | 29 +++++++++++------------------
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