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commit 9d22bcbaeec14efb483c3fc7e479e428ac5c31e4
Author: Jonathan Norman <jon at cosmo1847.co.uk>
Date:   Tue Nov 22 11:00:13 2011 +0000

    Updated book date and added small change about source dir

diff --git a/BOOK/general.ent b/BOOK/general.ent
index 62d3371..bcec26f 100644
--- a/BOOK/general.ent
+++ b/BOOK/general.ent
@@ -2,7 +2,7 @@
 
 <!ENTITY month "11"> <!-- Use two digits -->
 <!ENTITY month_name "November">
-<!ENTITY day "20"> <!-- Use two digits -->
+<!ENTITY day "22"> <!-- Use two digits -->
 <!ENTITY year "2011"> <!-- Use four digits -->
 
 <!ENTITY releasedate "&month_name; &day;, &year;">
diff --git a/BOOK/materials/common/introduction.xml b/BOOK/materials/common/introduction.xml
index 7b3719b..3cf0e7e 100644
--- a/BOOK/materials/common/introduction.xml
+++ b/BOOK/materials/common/introduction.xml
@@ -45,8 +45,8 @@
 
 <screen><userinput>chmod -v a+wt ${CLFS}/sources</userinput></screen>
 
-  <para>You can download all needed packages and patches either by using the
-  links on the following pages in this section, or by passing the
+  <para>You can download all needed packages and patches into this directory either
+   by using the links on the following pages in this section, or by passing the
   <ulink url="../dl.list">download list</ulink> to <command>wget</command>.</para>
 
 </sect1>

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Summary of changes:
 BOOK/general.ent                       |    2 +-
 BOOK/materials/common/introduction.xml |    4 ++--
 2 files changed, 3 insertions(+), 3 deletions(-)


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