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commit 92581b4d69b02144bcded45c7955bfa8b2f2b0f8
Author: Jonathan Norman <jon at cosmo1847.co.uk>
Date:   Sun Jun 19 19:31:11 2011 +0100

    Reworded section about checking  variable as root

diff --git a/BOOK/boot/common/devices.xml b/BOOK/boot/common/devices.xml
index 4418089..91b708b 100644
--- a/BOOK/boot/common/devices.xml
+++ b/BOOK/boot/common/devices.xml
@@ -19,9 +19,10 @@
 
     <note os="a">
       <para>The commands in the remainder of the book should be run as
-      the <systemitem class="username">root</systemitem> user. Also,
-      double-check that ${CLFS} is set as
-      <systemitem class="username">root</systemitem>.</para>
+      the <systemitem class="username">root</systemitem> user. Check 
+      that ${CLFS} is set in the 
+      <systemitem class="username">root</systemitem> user’s environment
+       before proceeding.</para>
     </note>
 
     <para os="b">When the kernel boots the system, it requires the presence
diff --git a/BOOK/general.ent b/BOOK/general.ent
index ac697f1..6169e7a 100644
--- a/BOOK/general.ent
+++ b/BOOK/general.ent
@@ -2,7 +2,7 @@
 
 <!ENTITY month "06"> <!-- Use two digits -->
 <!ENTITY month_name "June">
-<!ENTITY day "18"> <!-- Use two digits -->
+<!ENTITY day "19"> <!-- Use two digits -->
 <!ENTITY year "2011"> <!-- Use four digits -->
 
 <!ENTITY releasedate "&month_name; &day;, &year;">

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Summary of changes:
 BOOK/boot/common/devices.xml |    7 ++++---
 BOOK/general.ent             |    2 +-
 2 files changed, 5 insertions(+), 4 deletions(-)


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