[Clfs-commits] commit: r5042 - in /trunk/BOOK: boot/mips/ cross-tools/native64/ final-system/64/ final-system/common/ final-system/multilib/ final-system/x86_64-64/ introduction/common/ partitioning/sparc/
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Mon Jun 8 01:31:50 PDT 2009
Author: chris at beaker67.com
Date: Mon Jun 8 08:31:50 2009
New Revision: 5042
Log:
Text updates
Modified:
trunk/BOOK/boot/mips/bootloaders.xml
trunk/BOOK/cross-tools/native64/variables.xml
trunk/BOOK/final-system/64/binutils.xml
trunk/BOOK/final-system/common/sysvinit.xml
trunk/BOOK/final-system/multilib/gmp-64bit.xml
trunk/BOOK/final-system/x86_64-64/binutils.xml
trunk/BOOK/introduction/common/whatsnew.xml
trunk/BOOK/partitioning/sparc/creatingpartition.xml
Modified: trunk/BOOK/boot/mips/bootloaders.xml
==============================================================================
--- trunk/BOOK/boot/mips/bootloaders.xml (original)
+++ trunk/BOOK/boot/mips/bootloaders.xml Mon Jun 8 08:31:50 2009
@@ -11,9 +11,9 @@
<title>Bootloaders</title>
<para>On MIPS based platforms, we have 2 different bootloaders - Colo
- for the Cobalt based MIPS machines and Arcload for the SGI Machines.
+ for the Cobalt based MIPS machines and Arcload for the SGI machines.
At this time, in the boot scenario, the only bootloader we can build
- and that is usable is Cobalt bootloader. On SGI Machines that follow
+ and that is usable is Cobalt bootloader. On SGI machines that follow
this build method, we recommend to do a netboot. Information about
netbooting can be found at the link below.</para>
Modified: trunk/BOOK/cross-tools/native64/variables.xml
==============================================================================
--- trunk/BOOK/cross-tools/native64/variables.xml (original)
+++ trunk/BOOK/cross-tools/native64/variables.xml Mon Jun 8 08:31:50 2009
@@ -42,8 +42,8 @@
<screen os="k"><userinput>export CLFS_TARGET32="sparcv9-unknown-linux-gnu"</userinput></screen>
- <para os="l">For All Others consult the CLFS Book for that architicure. In Chapter 5 for
- the information.</para>
+ <para os="l">For all others consult the CLFS Book for the appropriate
+ architecture, in Chapter 5.</para>
<xi:include xmlns:xi="http://www.w3.org/2003/XInclude"
href="../x86/variables.xml"
Modified: trunk/BOOK/final-system/64/binutils.xml
==============================================================================
--- trunk/BOOK/final-system/64/binutils.xml (original)
+++ trunk/BOOK/final-system/64/binutils.xml Mon Jun 8 08:31:50 2009
@@ -49,10 +49,12 @@
href="../common/binutils.xml"
xpointer="xpointer(//*[@os='p2'])"/>
- <para os="q1">Libiberty uses <command>gcc -print-multi-os-directory</command>
- to determine where to install libiberty.a. Because our temporary gcc is
- still multilib-aware, the command returns <literal>../lib64</literal> which
- causes the archive to be installed into /usr/lib64. The following sed will
+ <para os="q1">Libiberty uses
+ <command>gcc -print-multi-os-directory</command> to determine where to
+ install <filename class="libraryfile">libiberty.a</filename>. Because our
+ temporary GCC is still multilib-aware, the command returns
+ <literal>../lib64</literal> which causes the archive to be installed into
+ <filename class="directory">/usr/lib64</filename>. The following sed will
prevent this:</para>
<screen os="q2"><userinput>sed -i 's%\(^MULTIOSDIR = \).*%\1 ../lib%' libiberty/Makefile.in</userinput></screen>
@@ -108,8 +110,8 @@
xpointer="xpointer(//*[@os='q'])"/>
<para os="w1">Now that the tests have completed, remove the symlinks in
- /usr/lib64 - they should be the only things in that directory, so we
- can remove it without force :</para>
+ <filename class="directory">/usr/lib64</filename> - they should be the
+ only things in that directory, so we can remove it without force:</para>
<screen os="w2"><userinput>rm -v /usr/lib64/libstd*so*
rmdir -v /usr/lib64</userinput></screen>
Modified: trunk/BOOK/final-system/common/sysvinit.xml
==============================================================================
--- trunk/BOOK/final-system/common/sysvinit.xml (original)
+++ trunk/BOOK/final-system/common/sysvinit.xml Mon Jun 8 08:31:50 2009
@@ -90,14 +90,14 @@
EOF</userinput></screen>
<para>If your system has a serial console run the following command to add
- the entry to <filename>/etc/inittab</filename>.</para>
+ the entry to <filename>/etc/inittab</filename>:</para>
<screen><userinput>cat >> /etc/inittab << "EOF"
<literal>c0:12345:respawn:/sbin/agetty 115200 ttyS0 vt100
</literal>
EOF</userinput></screen>
- <para>Finally, Add the end line to <filename>/etc/inittab</filename>.</para>
+ <para>Finally, add the end line to <filename>/etc/inittab</filename>:</para>
<screen><userinput>cat >> /etc/inittab << "EOF"
<literal># End /etc/inittab</literal>
Modified: trunk/BOOK/final-system/multilib/gmp-64bit.xml
==============================================================================
--- trunk/BOOK/final-system/multilib/gmp-64bit.xml (original)
+++ trunk/BOOK/final-system/multilib/gmp-64bit.xml Mon Jun 8 08:31:50 2009
@@ -71,7 +71,7 @@
<screen os="k"><userinput>mv -v /usr/include/gmp{,-64}.h</userinput></screen>
- <para os="l">Finally, Create a stub header in the place of the originals:</para>
+ <para os="l">Finally, create a stub header in the place of the originals:</para>
<screen os="m"><userinput>cat > /usr/include/gmp.h << "EOF"
/* gmp.h - Stub Header */
Modified: trunk/BOOK/final-system/x86_64-64/binutils.xml
==============================================================================
--- trunk/BOOK/final-system/x86_64-64/binutils.xml (original)
+++ trunk/BOOK/final-system/x86_64-64/binutils.xml Mon Jun 8 08:31:50 2009
@@ -97,8 +97,9 @@
href="../common/binutils.xml"
xpointer="xpointer(//*[@os='o'])"/>
- <para>The ld test suite accesses <filename>/lib64/ld-linux-x86-64.so</filename>
- in some of the tests. The following symbolic link will allow this:</para>
+ <para>The <command>ld</command> test suite accesses
+ <filename>/lib64/ld-linux-x86-64.so</filename> in some of the tests.
+ The following symbolic link will allow this:</para>
<screen><userinput>ln -sv /lib /lib64</userinput></screen>
Modified: trunk/BOOK/introduction/common/whatsnew.xml
==============================================================================
--- trunk/BOOK/introduction/common/whatsnew.xml (original)
+++ trunk/BOOK/introduction/common/whatsnew.xml Mon Jun 8 08:31:50 2009
@@ -10,7 +10,7 @@
<title>What's new since the last release.</title>
- <para>Below is a list of package updates made since the previous release of the book.</para>
+ <para>Below is a list of package updates made since the previous release of the book.</para>
<itemizedlist>
<title>Upgraded to:</title>
Modified: trunk/BOOK/partitioning/sparc/creatingpartition.xml
==============================================================================
--- trunk/BOOK/partitioning/sparc/creatingpartition.xml (original)
+++ trunk/BOOK/partitioning/sparc/creatingpartition.xml Mon Jun 8 08:31:50 2009
@@ -30,7 +30,7 @@
href="../common/creatingpartition.xml"
xpointer="xpointer(//*[@os='e'])"/>
- <para>On a Sparc system we have to create an special partition first. This
+ <para>On a Sparc system we have to create a special partition first. This
partition is called <quote>Whole disk</quote>, and must be the 3rd partition
on the disk.</para>
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