[Clfs-commits] commit: r4981 - in /trunk/BOOK/bootscripts/common: console.xml locale.xml

[svn at cross-lfs.org]

Author: chris at beaker67.com
Date: Wed Jun  3 19:51:40 2009
New Revision: 4981

Log:
Text updates

Modified:
    trunk/BOOK/bootscripts/common/console.xml
    trunk/BOOK/bootscripts/common/locale.xml

Modified: trunk/BOOK/bootscripts/common/console.xml
==============================================================================
--- trunk/BOOK/bootscripts/common/console.xml (original)
+++ trunk/BOOK/bootscripts/common/console.xml Wed Jun  3 19:51:40 2009
@@ -34,7 +34,7 @@
 
   <para>The default <filename>/etc/sysconfig/i18n</filename> is set up for UTF-8
   using the us keymap. You will need to edit the file to your specific needs.
-  The <filename>/etc/sysconfig/i18n</filename> has additional information it to
-  help you to assist in configuring.</para>
+  The <filename>/etc/sysconfig/i18n</filename> file has additional information
+  in it to help you to assist in configuring.</para>
 
 </sect1>

Modified: trunk/BOOK/bootscripts/common/locale.xml
==============================================================================
--- trunk/BOOK/bootscripts/common/locale.xml (original)
+++ trunk/BOOK/bootscripts/common/locale.xml Wed Jun  3 19:51:40 2009
@@ -126,12 +126,12 @@
   <para>Setting the keyboard layout, screen font, and locale-related
   environment variables are the only internationalization steps needed to
   support locales that use ordinary single-byte encodings and left-to-right
-  writing direction. UTF-8 has been testing on the English, French, German,
+  writing direction. UTF-8 has been tested on the English, French, German,
   Italian, and Spanish locales. All other locales are untested. If you discover
-  issues with any other locale please open a ticket in our trac system.</para>
+  issues with any other locale please open a ticket in our Trac system.</para>
 
-  <para>Some locales need addtional programs and support. CLFS will not be supporting
-  these locales via the book. We welcome the support for these other locales via the
-  <ulink url="&cblfs-root;"/>.</para>
+  <para>Some locales need additional programs and support. CLFS will not be
+  supporting these locales in the book. We welcome the support for these other
+  locales via <ulink url="&cblfs-root;"/>.</para>
 
 </sect1>