[Clfs-commits] commit: r4464 - in /trunk/BOOK/final-system/common: diffutils.xml tar.xml

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Author: chris at beaker67.com
Date: Wed Jan 14 22:27:24 2009
New Revision: 4464

Log:
Text updates

Modified:
    trunk/BOOK/final-system/common/diffutils.xml
    trunk/BOOK/final-system/common/tar.xml

Modified: trunk/BOOK/final-system/common/diffutils.xml
==============================================================================
--- trunk/BOOK/final-system/common/diffutils.xml (original)
+++ trunk/BOOK/final-system/common/diffutils.xml Wed Jan 14 22:27:24 2009
@@ -33,8 +33,8 @@
 
 <screen os="b"><userinput>./configure --prefix=/usr</userinput></screen>
 
-    <para os="s1">Diffutils wants ed as the default editor, the following sed will allow us
-    to use vim:</para>
+    <para os="s1">Diffutils wants <command>ed</command> as the default editor.
+    The following sed will change the default to <command>vim</command>:</para>
 
 <screen os="s2"><userinput>sed -i 's@\(^#define DEFAULT_EDITOR_PROGRAM \).*@\1"vi"@' config.h</userinput></screen>
 

Modified: trunk/BOOK/final-system/common/tar.xml
==============================================================================
--- trunk/BOOK/final-system/common/tar.xml (original)
+++ trunk/BOOK/final-system/common/tar.xml Wed Jan 14 22:27:24 2009
@@ -25,12 +25,13 @@
   <sect2 role="installation">
     <title>Installation of Tar</title>
 
-    <para os="p1">The following patch add a man page for tar:</para>
+    <para os="p1">The following patch adds a man page for <command>tar</command>:</para>
 
 <screen os="p2"><userinput>patch -Np1 -i ../&tar-man_page-patch;</userinput></screen>
 
     <para os="p3">The following patch contains a fix for an issue that may occur
-    when tar calls an outside compression utility like bzip2:</para>
+    when <command>tar</command> calls an outside compression utility like
+    <command>bzip2</command>:</para>
 
 <screen os="p4"><userinput>patch -Np1 -i ../&tar-revert_pipe_drain-patch;</userinput></screen>