[Clfs-commits] commit: r4360 - in /trunk/BOOK: ./ appendices/ introduction/common/ prologue/common/

svn at cross-lfs.org svn at cross-lfs.org
Tue Jan 6 20:56:20 PST 2009 

Author: chris at beaker67.com
Date: Wed Jan  7 04:56:19 2009
New Revision: 4360

Log:
Remove redundant Acknowledgments page

Removed:
    trunk/BOOK/appendices/acknowledgments.xml
Modified:
    trunk/BOOK/alpha-index.xml
    trunk/BOOK/introduction/common/acknowledgements.xml
    trunk/BOOK/introduction/common/changelog.xml
    trunk/BOOK/mips-index.xml
    trunk/BOOK/mips64-64-index.xml
    trunk/BOOK/mips64-index.xml
    trunk/BOOK/native-index.xml
    trunk/BOOK/native64-index.xml
    trunk/BOOK/ppc-index.xml
    trunk/BOOK/ppc64-index.xml
    trunk/BOOK/prologue/common/organization.xml
    trunk/BOOK/sparc-index.xml
    trunk/BOOK/sparc64-64-index.xml
    trunk/BOOK/sparc64-index.xml
    trunk/BOOK/x86-index.xml
    trunk/BOOK/x86_64-64-index.xml
    trunk/BOOK/x86_64-index.xml

Modified: trunk/BOOK/alpha-index.xml
==============================================================================
--- trunk/BOOK/alpha-index.xml (original)
+++ trunk/BOOK/alpha-index.xml Wed Jan  7 04:56:19 2009
@@ -72,7 +72,6 @@
     <title>Appendices</title>
 
     <xi:include xmlns:xi="http://www.w3.org/2003/XInclude" href="appendices/acronymlist.xml"/>
-    <xi:include xmlns:xi="http://www.w3.org/2003/XInclude" href="appendices/acknowledgments.xml"/>
     <xi:include xmlns:xi="http://www.w3.org/2003/XInclude" href="appendices/dependencies/common.xml"/>
     <xi:include xmlns:xi="http://www.w3.org/2003/XInclude" href="appendices/dependencies/alpha.xml"/>
     <xi:include xmlns:xi="http://www.w3.org/2003/XInclude" href="appendices/license.xml"/>

Modified: trunk/BOOK/introduction/common/acknowledgements.xml
==============================================================================
--- trunk/BOOK/introduction/common/acknowledgements.xml (original)
+++ trunk/BOOK/introduction/common/acknowledgements.xml Wed Jan  7 04:56:19 2009
@@ -12,7 +12,7 @@
   <para>The CLFS team would like to acknowledge people who
   have assisted in making the book what it is today.</para>
 
- <para>Our Leaders:</para>
+  <para>Our Leaders:</para>
 
   <itemizedlist>
     <listitem>
@@ -62,7 +62,7 @@
   </itemizedlist>
 
   <para>Outside the Development Team</para>
- <itemizedlist>
+  <itemizedlist>
     <listitem>
       <para>Jürg Billeter - Testing and assisting in the development of the Linux Headers Package</para>
     </listitem>
@@ -82,7 +82,7 @@
   who have provided valuable technical and editorial corrections while testing
   the Cross-LFS book.</para>
 
- <itemizedlist>
+  <itemizedlist>
     <listitem>
       <para>G. Moko - Text updates and Typos</para>
     </listitem>
@@ -100,6 +100,16 @@
     </listitem>
   </itemizedlist>
 
+  <para>The Linux From Scratch Project</para>
+  <itemizedlist>
+    <listitem>
+      <para><ulink url="mailto:gerard at linuxfromscratch.org">Gerard
+      Beekmans</ulink> <gerard at linuxfromscratch.org> –
+      Creator of Linux From Scratch, on which Cross-LFS is based</para>
+    </listitem>
+
+  </itemizedlist>
+
   <para>Thank you all for your support.</para>
 
 </sect1>

Modified: trunk/BOOK/introduction/common/changelog.xml
==============================================================================
--- trunk/BOOK/introduction/common/changelog.xml (original)
+++ trunk/BOOK/introduction/common/changelog.xml Wed Jan  7 04:56:19 2009
@@ -39,6 +39,10 @@
     <listitem>
       <para>January 06, 2009</para>
       <itemizedlist>
+        <listitem>
+          <para>[Chris] - Removed redundant Acknowledgments page in
+          Appendices.</para>
+        </listitem>
         <listitem>
           <para>[Jim] - Corrected Build Issue with Groff 1.20.</para>
         </listitem>

Modified: trunk/BOOK/mips-index.xml
==============================================================================
--- trunk/BOOK/mips-index.xml (original)
+++ trunk/BOOK/mips-index.xml Wed Jan  7 04:56:19 2009
@@ -70,7 +70,6 @@
     <title>Appendices</title>
 
     <xi:include xmlns:xi="http://www.w3.org/2003/XInclude" href="appendices/acronymlist.xml"/>
-    <xi:include xmlns:xi="http://www.w3.org/2003/XInclude" href="appendices/acknowledgments.xml"/>
     <xi:include xmlns:xi="http://www.w3.org/2003/XInclude" href="appendices/dependencies/common.xml"/>
     <xi:include xmlns:xi="http://www.w3.org/2003/XInclude" href="appendices/dependencies/mips.xml"/>
     <xi:include xmlns:xi="http://www.w3.org/2003/XInclude" href="appendices/license.xml"/>

Modified: trunk/BOOK/mips64-64-index.xml
==============================================================================
--- trunk/BOOK/mips64-64-index.xml (original)
+++ trunk/BOOK/mips64-64-index.xml Wed Jan  7 04:56:19 2009
@@ -70,7 +70,6 @@
     <title>Appendices</title>
 
     <xi:include xmlns:xi="http://www.w3.org/2003/XInclude" href="appendices/acronymlist.xml"/>
-    <xi:include xmlns:xi="http://www.w3.org/2003/XInclude" href="appendices/acknowledgments.xml"/>
     <xi:include xmlns:xi="http://www.w3.org/2003/XInclude" href="appendices/dependencies/common.xml"/>
     <xi:include xmlns:xi="http://www.w3.org/2003/XInclude" href="appendices/dependencies/mips.xml"/>
     <xi:include xmlns:xi="http://www.w3.org/2003/XInclude" href="appendices/license.xml"/>

Modified: trunk/BOOK/mips64-index.xml
==============================================================================
--- trunk/BOOK/mips64-index.xml (original)
+++ trunk/BOOK/mips64-index.xml Wed Jan  7 04:56:19 2009
@@ -70,7 +70,6 @@
     <title>Appendices</title>
 
     <xi:include xmlns:xi="http://www.w3.org/2003/XInclude" href="appendices/acronymlist.xml"/>
-    <xi:include xmlns:xi="http://www.w3.org/2003/XInclude" href="appendices/acknowledgments.xml"/>
     <xi:include xmlns:xi="http://www.w3.org/2003/XInclude" href="appendices/dependencies/common.xml"/>
     <xi:include xmlns:xi="http://www.w3.org/2003/XInclude" href="appendices/dependencies/mips.xml"/>
     <xi:include xmlns:xi="http://www.w3.org/2003/XInclude" href="appendices/license.xml"/>

Modified: trunk/BOOK/native-index.xml
==============================================================================
--- trunk/BOOK/native-index.xml (original)
+++ trunk/BOOK/native-index.xml Wed Jan  7 04:56:19 2009
@@ -71,7 +71,6 @@
     <title>Appendices</title>
 
     <xi:include xmlns:xi="http://www.w3.org/2003/XInclude" href="appendices/acronymlist.xml"/>
-    <xi:include xmlns:xi="http://www.w3.org/2003/XInclude" href="appendices/acknowledgments.xml"/>
     <xi:include xmlns:xi="http://www.w3.org/2003/XInclude" href="appendices/dependencies/common.xml"/>
     <xi:include xmlns:xi="http://www.w3.org/2003/XInclude" href="appendices/dependencies/x86.xml"/>
     <xi:include xmlns:xi="http://www.w3.org/2003/XInclude" href="appendices/license.xml"/>

Modified: trunk/BOOK/native64-index.xml
==============================================================================
--- trunk/BOOK/native64-index.xml (original)
+++ trunk/BOOK/native64-index.xml Wed Jan  7 04:56:19 2009
@@ -71,7 +71,6 @@
     <title>Appendices</title>
 
     <xi:include xmlns:xi="http://www.w3.org/2003/XInclude" href="appendices/acronymlist.xml"/>
-    <xi:include xmlns:xi="http://www.w3.org/2003/XInclude" href="appendices/acknowledgments.xml"/>
     <xi:include xmlns:xi="http://www.w3.org/2003/XInclude" href="appendices/dependencies/common.xml"/>
     <xi:include xmlns:xi="http://www.w3.org/2003/XInclude" href="appendices/dependencies/x86.xml"/>
     <xi:include xmlns:xi="http://www.w3.org/2003/XInclude" href="appendices/license.xml"/>

Modified: trunk/BOOK/ppc-index.xml
==============================================================================
--- trunk/BOOK/ppc-index.xml (original)
+++ trunk/BOOK/ppc-index.xml Wed Jan  7 04:56:19 2009
@@ -72,7 +72,6 @@
     <title>Appendices</title>
 
     <xi:include xmlns:xi="http://www.w3.org/2003/XInclude" href="appendices/acronymlist.xml"/>
-    <xi:include xmlns:xi="http://www.w3.org/2003/XInclude" href="appendices/acknowledgments.xml"/>
     <xi:include xmlns:xi="http://www.w3.org/2003/XInclude" href="appendices/dependencies/common.xml"/>
     <xi:include xmlns:xi="http://www.w3.org/2003/XInclude" href="appendices/dependencies/ppc.xml"/>
     <xi:include xmlns:xi="http://www.w3.org/2003/XInclude" href="appendices/ppc/macmiscellany.xml"/>

Modified: trunk/BOOK/ppc64-index.xml
==============================================================================
--- trunk/BOOK/ppc64-index.xml (original)
+++ trunk/BOOK/ppc64-index.xml Wed Jan  7 04:56:19 2009
@@ -72,7 +72,6 @@
     <title>Appendices</title>
 
     <xi:include xmlns:xi="http://www.w3.org/2003/XInclude" href="appendices/acronymlist.xml"/>
-    <xi:include xmlns:xi="http://www.w3.org/2003/XInclude" href="appendices/acknowledgments.xml"/>
     <xi:include xmlns:xi="http://www.w3.org/2003/XInclude" href="appendices/dependencies/common.xml"/>
     <xi:include xmlns:xi="http://www.w3.org/2003/XInclude" href="appendices/dependencies/ppc.xml"/>
     <xi:include xmlns:xi="http://www.w3.org/2003/XInclude" href="appendices/ppc/macmiscellany.xml"/>

Modified: trunk/BOOK/prologue/common/organization.xml
==============================================================================
--- trunk/BOOK/prologue/common/organization.xml (original)
+++ trunk/BOOK/prologue/common/organization.xml Wed Jan  7 04:56:19 2009
@@ -65,11 +65,9 @@
 
     <para>The appendices contain information that doesn't really fit anywhere
     else in the book. Appendix A contains definitions of acronyms and
-    terms used in the book; Appendix B gives acknowledgments to people
-    who have helped work on the CLFS project and website; Appendix C and
-    D have information about package dependencies and the the build
-    order. Some architectures may have additional appendices for
-    arch-specific issues.</para>
+    terms used in the book; Appendices B and C have information about
+    package dependencies and the build order. Some architectures may have
+    additional appendices for arch-specific issues.</para>
 
   </sect2>
 

Modified: trunk/BOOK/sparc-index.xml
==============================================================================
--- trunk/BOOK/sparc-index.xml (original)
+++ trunk/BOOK/sparc-index.xml Wed Jan  7 04:56:19 2009
@@ -72,7 +72,6 @@
     <title>Appendices</title>
 
     <xi:include xmlns:xi="http://www.w3.org/2003/XInclude" href="appendices/acronymlist.xml"/>
-    <xi:include xmlns:xi="http://www.w3.org/2003/XInclude" href="appendices/acknowledgments.xml"/>
     <xi:include xmlns:xi="http://www.w3.org/2003/XInclude" href="appendices/dependencies/common.xml"/>
     <xi:include xmlns:xi="http://www.w3.org/2003/XInclude" href="appendices/dependencies/sparc.xml"/>
     <xi:include xmlns:xi="http://www.w3.org/2003/XInclude" href="appendices/license.xml"/>

Modified: trunk/BOOK/sparc64-64-index.xml
==============================================================================
--- trunk/BOOK/sparc64-64-index.xml (original)
+++ trunk/BOOK/sparc64-64-index.xml Wed Jan  7 04:56:19 2009
@@ -72,7 +72,6 @@
     <title>Appendices</title>
 
     <xi:include xmlns:xi="http://www.w3.org/2003/XInclude" href="appendices/acronymlist.xml"/>
-    <xi:include xmlns:xi="http://www.w3.org/2003/XInclude" href="appendices/acknowledgments.xml"/>
     <xi:include xmlns:xi="http://www.w3.org/2003/XInclude" href="appendices/dependencies/common.xml"/>
     <xi:include xmlns:xi="http://www.w3.org/2003/XInclude" href="appendices/dependencies/sparc.xml"/>
     <xi:include xmlns:xi="http://www.w3.org/2003/XInclude" href="appendices/license.xml"/>

Modified: trunk/BOOK/sparc64-index.xml
==============================================================================
--- trunk/BOOK/sparc64-index.xml (original)
+++ trunk/BOOK/sparc64-index.xml Wed Jan  7 04:56:19 2009
@@ -72,7 +72,6 @@
     <title>Appendices</title>
 
     <xi:include xmlns:xi="http://www.w3.org/2003/XInclude" href="appendices/acronymlist.xml"/>
-    <xi:include xmlns:xi="http://www.w3.org/2003/XInclude" href="appendices/acknowledgments.xml"/>
     <xi:include xmlns:xi="http://www.w3.org/2003/XInclude" href="appendices/dependencies/common.xml"/>
     <xi:include xmlns:xi="http://www.w3.org/2003/XInclude" href="appendices/dependencies/sparc.xml"/>
     <xi:include xmlns:xi="http://www.w3.org/2003/XInclude" href="appendices/license.xml"/>

Modified: trunk/BOOK/x86-index.xml
==============================================================================
--- trunk/BOOK/x86-index.xml (original)
+++ trunk/BOOK/x86-index.xml Wed Jan  7 04:56:19 2009
@@ -72,7 +72,6 @@
     <title>Appendices</title>
 
     <xi:include xmlns:xi="http://www.w3.org/2003/XInclude" href="appendices/acronymlist.xml"/>
-    <xi:include xmlns:xi="http://www.w3.org/2003/XInclude" href="appendices/acknowledgments.xml"/>
     <xi:include xmlns:xi="http://www.w3.org/2003/XInclude" href="appendices/dependencies/common.xml"/>
     <xi:include xmlns:xi="http://www.w3.org/2003/XInclude" href="appendices/dependencies/x86.xml"/>
     <xi:include xmlns:xi="http://www.w3.org/2003/XInclude" href="appendices/license.xml"/>

Modified: trunk/BOOK/x86_64-64-index.xml
==============================================================================
--- trunk/BOOK/x86_64-64-index.xml (original)
+++ trunk/BOOK/x86_64-64-index.xml Wed Jan  7 04:56:19 2009
@@ -72,7 +72,6 @@
     <title>Appendices</title>
 
     <xi:include xmlns:xi="http://www.w3.org/2003/XInclude" href="appendices/acronymlist.xml"/>
-    <xi:include xmlns:xi="http://www.w3.org/2003/XInclude" href="appendices/acknowledgments.xml"/>
     <xi:include xmlns:xi="http://www.w3.org/2003/XInclude" href="appendices/dependencies/common.xml"/>
     <xi:include xmlns:xi="http://www.w3.org/2003/XInclude" href="appendices/dependencies/x86_64-64.xml"/>
     <xi:include xmlns:xi="http://www.w3.org/2003/XInclude" href="appendices/license.xml"/>

Modified: trunk/BOOK/x86_64-index.xml
==============================================================================
--- trunk/BOOK/x86_64-index.xml (original)
+++ trunk/BOOK/x86_64-index.xml Wed Jan  7 04:56:19 2009
@@ -72,7 +72,6 @@
     <title>Appendices</title>
 
     <xi:include xmlns:xi="http://www.w3.org/2003/XInclude" href="appendices/acronymlist.xml"/>
-    <xi:include xmlns:xi="http://www.w3.org/2003/XInclude" href="appendices/acknowledgments.xml"/>
     <xi:include xmlns:xi="http://www.w3.org/2003/XInclude" href="appendices/dependencies/common.xml"/>
     <xi:include xmlns:xi="http://www.w3.org/2003/XInclude" href="appendices/dependencies/x86.xml"/>
     <xi:include xmlns:xi="http://www.w3.org/2003/XInclude" href="appendices/license.xml"/>

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