[Clfs-commits] commit: r4341 - in /branches/clfs-sysroot/BOOK/final-system/common: coreutils.xml pkgmgt.xml

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Author: chris at beaker67.com
Date: Mon Jan  5 10:10:16 2009
New Revision: 4341

Log:
A sed command was removed from Coreutils instructions

Modified:
    branches/clfs-sysroot/BOOK/final-system/common/coreutils.xml
    branches/clfs-sysroot/BOOK/final-system/common/pkgmgt.xml

Modified: branches/clfs-sysroot/BOOK/final-system/common/coreutils.xml
==============================================================================
--- branches/clfs-sysroot/BOOK/final-system/common/coreutils.xml (original)
+++ branches/clfs-sysroot/BOOK/final-system/common/coreutils.xml Mon Jan  5 10:10:16 2009
@@ -32,15 +32,15 @@
 
 <screen os="p2"><userinput>patch -Np1 -i ../&coreutils-uname-patch;</userinput></screen>
 
-    <para os="aa">When the uname patch and the sed above were applied. The
-    source files for uname and touch were updated. Because they have a newer
-    timestamp then the man pages the <filename>Makefile</filename> is going to
-    try to regenerate the man pages. If executables for the target architecture
+    <para os="aa">The above patch modifies the source code for
+    <command>uname</command>. Because it now has a newer timestamp then
+    its man page, the <filename>Makefile</filename> is going to
+    try to regenerate the man page. If executables for the target architecture
     can not be executed by the host system, the build will fail. The following
-    command fixes this by giving the two man pages a newer timestamp then their
-    cooresponding source files:</para>
-
-<screen os="ab"><userinput>touch man/uname.1 man/touch.1 man/hostname.1</userinput></screen>
+    command fixes this by giving the man page a newer timestamp then its
+    corresponding source file:</para>
+
+<screen os="ab"><userinput>touch man/uname.1</userinput></screen>
 
     <para os="s1">Coreutils attempts to use the <command>install</command>
     program it just built to perform the install. This will not work if the

Modified: branches/clfs-sysroot/BOOK/final-system/common/pkgmgt.xml
==============================================================================
--- branches/clfs-sysroot/BOOK/final-system/common/pkgmgt.xml (original)
+++ branches/clfs-sysroot/BOOK/final-system/common/pkgmgt.xml Mon Jan  5 10:10:16 2009
@@ -20,7 +20,7 @@
   issues that may arise when upgrading packages.</para>
 
   <para>Some reasons why no specific package manager is recommended in
-  CLFS or BLFS include:</para>
+  CLFS or CBLFS include:</para>
 
   <itemizedlist>
     <listitem>
@@ -43,7 +43,7 @@
     <title>Upgrade Issues</title>
 
     <para>A Package Manager makes it easy to upgrade to newer versions when they
-    are released. Generally the instructions in the CLFS and BLFS Book can be
+    are released. Generally the instructions in CLFS and CBLFS can be
     used to upgrade to the newer versions. Here are some points that you should
     be aware of when upgrading packages, especially on a running system.</para>