[Clfs-commits] commit: r4301 - in /trunk/BOOK: cross-tools/alpha/glibc-headers.xml cross-tools/common/ncurses.xml testsuite-tools/common/expect.xml

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Author: chris at beaker67.com
Date: Sun Jan  4 03:23:45 2009
New Revision: 4301

Log:
Text updates

Modified:
    trunk/BOOK/cross-tools/alpha/glibc-headers.xml
    trunk/BOOK/cross-tools/common/ncurses.xml
    trunk/BOOK/testsuite-tools/common/expect.xml

Modified: trunk/BOOK/cross-tools/alpha/glibc-headers.xml
==============================================================================
--- trunk/BOOK/cross-tools/alpha/glibc-headers.xml (original)
+++ trunk/BOOK/cross-tools/alpha/glibc-headers.xml Sun Jan  4 03:23:45 2009
@@ -22,10 +22,13 @@
   <sect2 role="installation">
     <title>Installation of Glibc Headers</title>
 
-    <para os="s1">The following sed removes a dependency of gcc 3.4.x from
-    the glibc we are using in cross-lfs. The reason we are changing it is
-    because this only installs the headers, no compiling takes place. In the
-    next Glibc installation, we use the GCC that's built right after this section:</para>
+    <para os="s1">Glibc's <filename>configure</filename> script checks the
+    version of GCC, and will fail if it's less than 3.4. The next Glibc build
+    will use the GCC that will be installed into
+    <filename class="directory">/cross-tools</filename> in the next step.
+    However, in this step only the Glibc headers are being installed - no
+    compiling is taking place - so the GCC version isn't important. The
+    following sed removes the dependency of GCC 3.4.x:</para>
 
 <screen os="s2"><userinput>cp -v configure{,.orig}
 sed -e 's/3.4/3.[0-9]/g' configure.orig > configure</userinput></screen>

Modified: trunk/BOOK/cross-tools/common/ncurses.xml
==============================================================================
--- trunk/BOOK/cross-tools/common/ncurses.xml (original)
+++ trunk/BOOK/cross-tools/common/ncurses.xml Sun Jan  4 03:23:45 2009
@@ -34,12 +34,12 @@
 <screen os="b"><userinput>./configure --prefix=/cross-tools \
     --without-shared</userinput></screen>
 
-    <para os="c">Build the headers and then build tic:</para>
+    <para os="c">Build the headers and then build <command>tic</command>:</para>
 
 <screen os="d"><userinput>make -C include
 make -C progs tic</userinput></screen>
 
-    <para os="e">Install tic with the following command:</para>
+    <para os="e">Install <command>tic</command> with the following command:</para>
 
 <screen os="f"><userinput>install -m755 progs/tic /cross-tools/bin</userinput></screen>
 

Modified: trunk/BOOK/testsuite-tools/common/expect.xml
==============================================================================
--- trunk/BOOK/testsuite-tools/common/expect.xml (original)
+++ trunk/BOOK/testsuite-tools/common/expect.xml Sun Jan  4 03:23:45 2009
@@ -41,7 +41,7 @@
 <screen os="t4"><userinput>sed -i "s/tcl.h/tclInt.h/" exp_inter.c</userinput></screen>
 
     <para os="p1">The following patch prevents Expect from using functions
-    that are internal to TCL and are no longer available for expect to
+    that are internal to TCL and are no longer available for Expect to
     link against:</para>
 
 <screen os="p2"><userinput>patch -Np1 -i ../&expect-avoid_tcl_internals-patch;</userinput></screen>