[Clfs-commits] commit: r4053 - in /trunk/BOOK: final-system/common/glibc.xml temp-system/common/coreutils.xml

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Author: chris at beaker67.com
Date: Wed Oct 15 18:13:47 2008
New Revision: 4053

Log:
Various text/grammar fixes

Modified:
    trunk/BOOK/final-system/common/glibc.xml
    trunk/BOOK/temp-system/common/coreutils.xml

Modified: trunk/BOOK/final-system/common/glibc.xml
==============================================================================
--- trunk/BOOK/final-system/common/glibc.xml (original)
+++ trunk/BOOK/final-system/common/glibc.xml Wed Oct 15 18:13:47 2008
@@ -46,7 +46,7 @@
     of achieving a clean build.</para>
 
     <para os="c">The following patch fixes an issue that can
-    cause <command>localdef</command> to segfault:</para>
+    cause <command>localedef</command> to segfault:</para>
 
 <screen os="d"><userinput>patch -Np1 -i ../&glibc-localedef_segfault-patch;</userinput></screen>
 

Modified: trunk/BOOK/temp-system/common/coreutils.xml
==============================================================================
--- trunk/BOOK/temp-system/common/coreutils.xml (original)
+++ trunk/BOOK/temp-system/common/coreutils.xml Wed Oct 15 18:13:47 2008
@@ -33,15 +33,15 @@
     <para os="bs1">Coreutils attempts to use the <command>install</command>
     program it just built to perform the install. This will not work if the
     target architecture is incompatible with the host architecture. The
-    following command causes the Makefile to use the hosts
+    following command causes the Makefile to use the host's
     <command>install</command> to perform the install:</para>
 
 <screen os="bs2"><userinput>sed -i "/binPROGRAMS_INSTALL=/s:./ginstall:install:" src/Makefile.in</userinput></screen>
 
     <para os="ba">Configure can not properly determine how to get free space
-    when cross-compiling, Without putting the following entry into
-    <filename>config.cache</filename> the <command>df</command> program will
-    not be built.</para>
+    when cross-compiling - as a result, the <command>df</command> program will
+    not be built. Add the following entry to <filename>config.cache</filename>
+    to correct this:</para>
 
 <screen os="bb"><userinput>echo "fu_cv_sys_stat_statfs2_bsize=yes" > config.cache</userinput></screen>