[Clfs-commits] commit: r3956 - in /trunk/BOOK/final-system: common/module-init-tools.xml common/zlib.xml multilib/module-init-tools.xml multilib/perl-64bit.xml multilib/perl.xml multilib/zlib-64bit.xml multilib/zlib-n32.xml

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Author: jciccone
Date: Mon Jul  7 01:34:14 2008
New Revision: 3956

Log:
Fix some nit picks

Modified:
    trunk/BOOK/final-system/common/module-init-tools.xml
    trunk/BOOK/final-system/common/zlib.xml
    trunk/BOOK/final-system/multilib/module-init-tools.xml
    trunk/BOOK/final-system/multilib/perl-64bit.xml
    trunk/BOOK/final-system/multilib/perl.xml
    trunk/BOOK/final-system/multilib/zlib-64bit.xml
    trunk/BOOK/final-system/multilib/zlib-n32.xml

Modified: trunk/BOOK/final-system/common/module-init-tools.xml
==============================================================================
--- trunk/BOOK/final-system/common/module-init-tools.xml (original)
+++ trunk/BOOK/final-system/common/module-init-tools.xml Mon Jul  7 01:34:14 2008
@@ -32,16 +32,19 @@
 
 <screen os="a2"><userinput>patch -Np1 -i ../&module-init-tools-manpages-patch;</userinput></screen>
 
-    <para os="c">Issue the following commands to perform the tests
-    (note that the <command>make clean</command>
-    command is required to clean up the source tree, otherwise the code
-    built for testing will be installed, and the test version of
-    <command>modprobe</command> does not function outside the test
-    environment).</para>
+    <para os="c">Issue the following commands to perform the tests</para>
+
+    <note os="cc">
+      <para>note that the <command>make clean</command>
+      command is required to clean up the source tree, otherwise the code
+      built for testing will be installed, and the test version of
+      <command>modprobe</command> does not function outside the test
+      environment.</para>
+    </note>
 
 <screen os="d"><userinput>./configure &&
 make check &&
-make clean &&</userinput></screen>
+make clean</userinput></screen>
 
     <para os="e">Prepare Module-Init-Tools for compilation:</para>
 

Modified: trunk/BOOK/final-system/common/zlib.xml
==============================================================================
--- trunk/BOOK/final-system/common/zlib.xml (original)
+++ trunk/BOOK/final-system/common/zlib.xml Mon Jul  7 01:34:14 2008
@@ -45,8 +45,8 @@
 
 <screen os="g"><userinput>make install</userinput></screen>
 
-    <para os="h">The previous command installed a <filename
-    class="extension">.so</filename> file in <filename
+    <para os="h">The previous command installed two <filename
+    class="extension">.so</filename> files into <filename
     class="directory">/usr/lib</filename>. We will move it into
     <filename class="directory">/lib</filename> and then relink it
     to <filename class="directory">/usr/lib</filename>:</para>

Modified: trunk/BOOK/final-system/multilib/module-init-tools.xml
==============================================================================
--- trunk/BOOK/final-system/multilib/module-init-tools.xml (original)
+++ trunk/BOOK/final-system/multilib/module-init-tools.xml Mon Jul  7 01:34:14 2008
@@ -33,9 +33,13 @@
     href="../common/module-init-tools.xml"
     xpointer="xpointer(//*[@os='c'])"/>
 
+    <xi:include xmlns:xi="http://www.w3.org/2003/XInclude"
+    href="../common/module-init-tools.xml"
+    xpointer="xpointer(//*[@os='cc'])"/>
+
 <screen os="d"><userinput>CC="gcc ${BUILD64}" ./configure &&
 make check &&
-make clean &&</userinput></screen>
+make clean</userinput></screen>
 
     <xi:include xmlns:xi="http://www.w3.org/2003/XInclude"
     href="../common/module-init-tools.xml"

Modified: trunk/BOOK/final-system/multilib/perl-64bit.xml
==============================================================================
--- trunk/BOOK/final-system/multilib/perl-64bit.xml (original)
+++ trunk/BOOK/final-system/multilib/perl-64bit.xml Mon Jul  7 01:34:14 2008
@@ -135,7 +135,7 @@
     <command>USE_ARCH=32 perl -V:cc</command> will give the value of CC used to
     build the 32bit perl. The multiarch_wrapper will help later with building
     perl extensions and bindings. Without the multiarch_wrapper it is very hard
-    to setup a 32bit extenstion or binding.</para>
+    to setup a 32bit extension or binding.</para>
 
   </sect2>
 

Modified: trunk/BOOK/final-system/multilib/perl.xml
==============================================================================
--- trunk/BOOK/final-system/multilib/perl.xml (original)
+++ trunk/BOOK/final-system/multilib/perl.xml Mon Jul  7 01:34:14 2008
@@ -94,7 +94,7 @@
     xpointer="xpointer(//*[@os='k'])"/>
 
     <para os="l">Add a suffix to the <command>perl</command> binary which will
-    be used by the multilib wrapper installed later:</para>
+    be used by the multilib wrapper:</para>
 
 <screen os="m"><userinput>mv /usr/bin/perl{,-32}
 mv /usr/bin/perl&perl-version;{,-32}</userinput></screen>

Modified: trunk/BOOK/final-system/multilib/zlib-64bit.xml
==============================================================================
--- trunk/BOOK/final-system/multilib/zlib-64bit.xml (original)
+++ trunk/BOOK/final-system/multilib/zlib-64bit.xml Mon Jul  7 01:34:14 2008
@@ -56,8 +56,8 @@
     href="zlib.xml"
     xpointer="xpointer(//*[@os='g'])"/>
 
-    <para os="h">The previous command installed a <filename
-    class="extension">.so</filename> file in <filename
+    <para os="h">The previous command installed two <filename
+    class="extension">.so</filename> files into <filename
     class="directory">/usr/lib64</filename>. We will move it into
     <filename class="directory">/lib64</filename> and then relink it
     to <filename class="directory">/usr/lib64</filename>:</para>

Modified: trunk/BOOK/final-system/multilib/zlib-n32.xml
==============================================================================
--- trunk/BOOK/final-system/multilib/zlib-n32.xml (original)
+++ trunk/BOOK/final-system/multilib/zlib-n32.xml Mon Jul  7 01:34:14 2008
@@ -57,8 +57,8 @@
     href="zlib.xml"
     xpointer="xpointer(//*[@os='g'])"/>
 
-    <para os="h">The previous command installed a <filename
-    class="extension">.so</filename> file in <filename
+    <para os="h">The previous command installed two <filename
+    class="extension">.so</filename> files into <filename
     class="directory">/usr/lib32</filename>. We will remove itinto
     <filename class="directory">/lib32</filename> and then relink it
     to <filename class="directory">/usr/lib32</filename>:</para>