[Clfs-commits] commit: r4211 - in /trunk/BOOK/final-system: alpha/aboot.xml common/bison.xml ppc64/binutils.xml

[svn at cross-lfs.org]

Author: chris at beaker67.com
Date: Thu Dec 25 02:38:56 2008
New Revision: 4211

Log:
Text fixes

Modified:
    trunk/BOOK/final-system/alpha/aboot.xml
    trunk/BOOK/final-system/common/bison.xml
    trunk/BOOK/final-system/ppc64/binutils.xml

Modified: trunk/BOOK/final-system/alpha/aboot.xml
==============================================================================
--- trunk/BOOK/final-system/alpha/aboot.xml (original)
+++ trunk/BOOK/final-system/alpha/aboot.xml Thu Dec 25 02:38:56 2008
@@ -68,7 +68,7 @@
       <varlistentry id="e2writeboot">
         <term><command>e2writeboot</command></term>
         <listitem>
-          <para>Can  be  used  to write a secondary bootstrap loader to an
+          <para>Can be used to write a secondary bootstrap loader to an
           ext2 formatted filesystem (normally on a floppy disk).</para>
           <indexterm zone="ch-system-aboot e2writeboot">
             <primary sortas="a-e2writeboot">e2writeboot</primary>

Modified: trunk/BOOK/final-system/common/bison.xml
==============================================================================
--- trunk/BOOK/final-system/common/bison.xml (original)
+++ trunk/BOOK/final-system/common/bison.xml Thu Dec 25 02:38:56 2008
@@ -28,7 +28,7 @@
 
 <screen os="b"><userinput>./configure --prefix=/usr</userinput></screen>
 
-    <para os="b1">The configure system causes bison to be built without support
+    <para os="b1">The configure system causes Bison to be built without support
     for internationalization of error messages if a <command>bison</command>
     program is not already in $PATH.  The following addition will correct
     this:</para>

Modified: trunk/BOOK/final-system/ppc64/binutils.xml
==============================================================================
--- trunk/BOOK/final-system/ppc64/binutils.xml (original)
+++ trunk/BOOK/final-system/ppc64/binutils.xml Thu Dec 25 02:38:56 2008
@@ -58,8 +58,8 @@
     xpointer="xpointer(//*[@os='ab'])"/>
 
     <para os="ac">The following patch corrects an error in the visibility
-    tests for <command>ld</command> which only affects ppc64, see <ulink
-    url="http://sourceware.org/ml/binutils/2004-08/msg00030.html"/>.</para>
+    tests for <command>ld</command> which only affects ppc64 (see <ulink
+    url="http://sourceware.org/ml/binutils/2004-08/msg00030.html"/>):</para>
 
 <screen os="ad"><userinput>patch -Np1 -i ../&binutils-ppc64-vistest-patch;</userinput></screen>