[Clfs-commits] commit: r4189 - in /trunk/BOOK/final-system: common/lzma.xml common/vim.xml mips/arcload.xml

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Author: chris at beaker67.com
Date: Mon Dec 22 09:27:44 2008
New Revision: 4189

Log:
Text updates

Modified:
    trunk/BOOK/final-system/common/lzma.xml
    trunk/BOOK/final-system/common/vim.xml
    trunk/BOOK/final-system/mips/arcload.xml

Modified: trunk/BOOK/final-system/common/lzma.xml
==============================================================================
--- trunk/BOOK/final-system/common/lzma.xml (original)
+++ trunk/BOOK/final-system/common/lzma.xml Mon Dec 22 09:27:44 2008
@@ -43,7 +43,7 @@
 
 <screen os="h"><userinput>mv -v /lib/liblzmadec.{a,la} /usr/lib</userinput></screen>
 
-    <para os="i">Create a symlink for shared library:</para>
+    <para os="i">Create a symlink for the shared library:</para>
 
 <screen os="j"><userinput>ln -svf ../../lib/liblzmadec.so.0 /usr/lib/liblzmadec.so</userinput></screen>
 

Modified: trunk/BOOK/final-system/common/vim.xml
==============================================================================
--- trunk/BOOK/final-system/common/vim.xml (original)
+++ trunk/BOOK/final-system/common/vim.xml Mon Dec 22 09:27:44 2008
@@ -37,7 +37,7 @@
     and (optionally) <filename>vim-&vim-version;-lang.tar.gz</filename>
     archives into the same directory.</para>
 
-    <para os="p1">The following patches merges all updates from the &vim-version; Branch
+    <para os="p1">The following patch merges all updates from the &vim-version; Branch
     from the Vim developers:</para>
 
 <screen os="p2"><userinput>patch -Np1 -i ../&vim-branch_update-patch;</userinput></screen>

Modified: trunk/BOOK/final-system/mips/arcload.xml
==============================================================================
--- trunk/BOOK/final-system/mips/arcload.xml (original)
+++ trunk/BOOK/final-system/mips/arcload.xml Mon Dec 22 09:27:44 2008
@@ -71,7 +71,7 @@
       <varlistentry id="sash64">
         <term><command>sash64</command></term>
         <listitem>
-          <para>Is a bootloader IP27/IP28/IP30 MIPS systems, which are
+          <para>Is a bootloader for IP27/IP28/IP30 MIPS systems, which are
           64 Bit.</para>
           <indexterm zone="ch-system-arcload sash64">
             <primary sortas="b-sash64">sash64</primary>