[Clfs-commits] commit: r4165 - in /trunk/BOOK/bootable: mips64/arcload.xml ppc/kernel.xml

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Author: chris at beaker67.com
Date: Mon Dec 22 04:10:02 2008
New Revision: 4165

Log:
Text fixes

Modified:
    trunk/BOOK/bootable/mips64/arcload.xml
    trunk/BOOK/bootable/ppc/kernel.xml

Modified: trunk/BOOK/bootable/mips64/arcload.xml
==============================================================================
--- trunk/BOOK/bootable/mips64/arcload.xml (original)
+++ trunk/BOOK/bootable/mips64/arcload.xml Mon Dec 22 04:10:02 2008
@@ -20,7 +20,7 @@
     Servers.</para>
   </note>
 
-  <para os="b">Earlier, we compiled and installed the Arcload  boot loader
+  <para os="b">Earlier, we compiled and installed the Arcload boot loader
   software in preparation for this step. Now we will configure our system
   to boot using Arcload. Here is a simple <filename>arc.cf</filename>
   to use.</para>

Modified: trunk/BOOK/bootable/ppc/kernel.xml
==============================================================================
--- trunk/BOOK/bootable/ppc/kernel.xml (original)
+++ trunk/BOOK/bootable/ppc/kernel.xml Mon Dec 22 04:10:02 2008
@@ -50,8 +50,9 @@
     xpointer="xpointer(//*[@os='j'])"/>
 
     <warning>
-    <para>If you are using a config from when the ARCH was ppc (instead of
-    powerpc), you will have to run <command>make menuconfig</command> after
+    <para>If you are using an existing config in which the ARCH was specified as
+    <literal>ppc</literal> (instead of <literal>powerpc</literal>), you will
+    have to run <command>make menuconfig</command> after
     <command>make oldconfig</command> and manually select many of the
     mac-specific options for ide and input.</para>
     </warning>