[Clfs-commits] commit: r4100 - in /trunk/BOOK: general.ent introduction/common/resources.xml

[svn at cross-lfs.org]

Author: chris at beaker67.com
Date: Tue Dec 16 06:35:19 2008
New Revision: 4100

Log:
Update date

Modified:
    trunk/BOOK/general.ent
    trunk/BOOK/introduction/common/resources.xml

Modified: trunk/BOOK/general.ent
==============================================================================
--- trunk/BOOK/general.ent (original)
+++ trunk/BOOK/general.ent Tue Dec 16 06:35:19 2008
@@ -2,7 +2,7 @@
 
 <!ENTITY month "12"> <!-- Use two digits -->
 <!ENTITY month_name "December">
-<!ENTITY day "15"> <!-- Use two digits -->
+<!ENTITY day "16"> <!-- Use two digits -->
 <!ENTITY year "2008"> <!-- Use four digits -->
 
 <!ENTITY releasedate "&month_name; &day;, &year;">

Modified: trunk/BOOK/introduction/common/resources.xml
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--- trunk/BOOK/introduction/common/resources.xml (original)
+++ trunk/BOOK/introduction/common/resources.xml Tue Dec 16 06:35:19 2008
@@ -40,10 +40,10 @@
   <sect2 id="ch-intro-newsserver">
     <title>News Server</title>
 
-    <para>Cross-LFS does not maintain it's own News Server, but we do provide
+    <para>Cross-LFS does not maintain its own News Server, but we do provide
     access via <uri>gmane.org</uri> <ulink url="http://gmane.org"/>. If you want to subscribe
-    to the Cross-LFS via a newsreader you can utilize <uri>gmane.org</uri>.
-    You can find the game search for CLFS with the following link:</para>
+    to the Cross-LFS lists via a newsreader you can utilize <uri>gmane.org</uri>.
+    You can find the gmane search for CLFS with the following link:</para>
 
    <para><ulink url="http://dir.gmane.org/search.php?match=clfs"/></para>