[Clfs-commits] commit: r4095 - in /trunk/BOOK/final-system/common: module-init-tools.xml vim.xml

[svn at cross-lfs.org]

Author: chris at beaker67.com
Date: Tue Dec 16 04:41:54 2008
New Revision: 4095

Log:
Minor text fixes

Modified:
    trunk/BOOK/final-system/common/module-init-tools.xml
    trunk/BOOK/final-system/common/vim.xml

Modified: trunk/BOOK/final-system/common/module-init-tools.xml
==============================================================================
--- trunk/BOOK/final-system/common/module-init-tools.xml (original)
+++ trunk/BOOK/final-system/common/module-init-tools.xml Tue Dec 16 04:41:54 2008
@@ -27,19 +27,18 @@
 
     <para os="a1">The tarball only contains sgml source for the manual pages.  The
     following patch contains the result of processing this through
-    <command>docbook2man</command> which we do not build as part of a basic clfs
-    install :</para>
+    <command>docbook2man</command> which we do not build as part of a basic CLFS
+    install:</para>
 
 <screen os="a2"><userinput>patch -Np1 -i ../&module-init-tools-manpages-patch;</userinput></screen>
 
     <para os="c">Issue the following commands to perform the tests</para>
 
     <note os="cc">
-      <para>note that the <command>make clean</command>
-      command is required to clean up the source tree, otherwise the code
-      built for testing will be installed, and the test version of
-      <command>modprobe</command> does not function outside the test
-      environment.</para>
+      <para>The <command>make clean</command> command is required to clean up
+      the source tree, otherwise the code built for testing will be installed,
+      and the test version of <command>modprobe</command> does not function
+      outside the test environment.</para>
     </note>
 
 <screen os="d"><userinput>./configure &&

Modified: trunk/BOOK/final-system/common/vim.xml
==============================================================================
--- trunk/BOOK/final-system/common/vim.xml (original)
+++ trunk/BOOK/final-system/common/vim.xml Tue Dec 16 04:41:54 2008
@@ -103,8 +103,7 @@
     system, you may want to recompile Vim after installing X. Vim
     comes with a GUI version of the editor that requires X and some
     additional libraries to be installed. For more information, refer to the
-    Vim documentation and the Vim installation page
-    in the CBLFS book at <ulink
+    Vim documentation and the Vim installation page in CBLFS at <ulink
     url="&cblfs-root;index.php/Vim"/>.</para>
 
   </sect2>